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I don't think its too bright. I like the colors on this one.
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I think the comp is just fine.
I do think the overall picture is a tad too bright. You can adjust the exposure in post. If you have Photoshop or Elements, you can make a new layer and multiply it, then erase out some of the darker image leaving only the main flower bright. There are many options to correcting the exposure in post. |
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I also think your composition is fine. One of the main guidelines for composition says that you shouldn't place your subjects in dead center of the frame, but it's just a guideline. I also think the brightness is fine. It's a very pleasing photo, nice start with your new camera.
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The brightness seems to be okay in my opinion. And the colours are very nice!
However I think you should've framed the daffodil according to the rule of thirds. And if I were you, I'd shoot in the largest possible aperture to blur the background even more. |
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Nothing wrong with brightness/coors/or central positioning here. I *think* I might have chosen to go wider/closer. I would have used f/8 for maximum sharpness or f/11 (or hyper focal setting if wider) for maximum DOF.
I think you should have waited for the cloud to pass from behind (or if it's a building find another angle/flower). And I probably would have tried to get a lower angle to set the flower more against the sky and move the horizon line down some.....I'm not above a little stem bending to get the composition I want.
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Very nice pic! In my opinion brightness is ok and composition too. Sometimes you have to break the rules! I also like the blurred background! Good luck with your new camera !
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