Cranes

[RobertM]

Newbie here. I see these cranes everyday on the way to work. I brougt the camera last evening. I thought the sunset on the orange cranes was interesting.



Width 1600
Height 1067
File Size 156828
Camera NIKON CORPORATION
Model NIKON D70
Exposure 1/100 sec
Aperture 11.0
Focal Length 46mm

[IABoomer]

The image is a little too wide for the forum. You should re-size it.

You've got some open space on the left, and things are too tight on the right. Top to bottom is okay, although I think I'd like to see something vertical and a bit wider to give a sense of the height of these cranes.

I'd also kind of like to see it without the light fixture being so prominent in the shot.

[vainqueur]

I like the edited version, looks better, might be nicer if the sky's transition of color between the top and bottom of the sky is more obvious, meaning the top is blue-er

[windrider86]

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