let's swing...

[Art]

Hi all, what does this swing transmit to you?

Can you please critic composition?

Thanks Art

Exif

Kodak Easyshare Z990
focal length 93.4mm
f 4.5
exposure 1/640 seg

[SGToliver]

Not sure what this pictures 'transmits' to me. It seems the focal point was the grass behind the swing and not the swing itself. I would have expected more bokeh if the swing had been in focus only. Or it may just be any PP you did on it that over sharpened the grass. The composition is ok but the overall picture doesn't do much for me. What message were you trying to convey with this image?

[John Hendry]

Originally Posted by SGToliver

Not sure what this pictures 'transmits' to me. It seems the focal point was the grass behind the swing and not the swing itself. I would have expected more bokeh if the swing had been in focus only. Or it may just be any PP you did on it that over sharpened the grass. The composition is ok but the overall picture doesn't do much for me. What message were you trying to convey with this image?

Sorry got to agree does nothing for me.

must be missing something.

all the best

[Krusty79]

I think you need a child in the picture to complete the story. Right now, it doesn't really say anything to me.

[Tito87]

Originally Posted by Krusty79

I think you need a child in the picture to complete the story. Right now, it doesn't really say anything to me.

+1........

[Art]

Originally Posted by SGToliver

Not sure what this pictures 'transmits' to me. It seems the focal point was the grass behind the swing and not the swing itself. I would have expected more bokeh if the swing had been in focus only. Or it may just be any PP you did on it that over sharpened the grass. The composition is ok but the overall picture doesn't do much for me. What message were you trying to convey with this image?

Well, in the negative manner, loneliness and the positive stand point hopeful
The lines of the chains and the curve of the seat
Thanks for your comments
Art

[Art]

Thanks for your comments
Art

[Art]

Yes, it was too hot to come out to play
Thanks for your comments
Art

[Art]

Originally Posted by Tito87

+1........

Thanks Tito
Art