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Old 08-29-2011, 06:41 PM
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Shot with a Pentax ME Super SLR using 200 ISO Fijucolor Superia film on auto exposure.

Any tips on how the composition can improve?
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Old 08-29-2011, 07:04 PM
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Nice image there are two points of interest the boat and the couple I find they conflict with each other . Perhaps better with only one of them?

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ps: a level horizon is always good!
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Old 08-30-2011, 12:50 AM
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Nice image there are two points of interest the boat and the couple I find they conflict with each other . Perhaps better with only one of them?

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ps: a level horizon is always good!

Thanks for the input ill make sure i level the horizon next time!

Heres an edited version of it thanks!
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Old 08-30-2011, 08:27 PM
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Pentax ME Super? Holy crap, that was my first SLR!!!

I agree with John's comments. The edited version looks better. The only other thing I would recommend is to clone out the water bottle next to the woman.
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