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This is an image from the Independence Mine ghost town in Alaska. I'm looking for a general impression and critique of the image...things that I did well, and things that I could have done better. I was debating on the black and white because the there are some nice colors in the image, but I felt that the b&w captured "ghost town" feel and made the clouds more impressive. Thank you for your feedback.

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Old 08-25-2011, 08:28 PM
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It's a fine image. Don't change anything. Blow it up and hang it on the wall.
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Old 08-25-2011, 08:41 PM
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I like it, but other than the frumpy-looking building at the lower right, it's hard to tell that it's a ghost town. It's a great wide-angle view, though. I like the detail in the clouds as well - B&W is a good choice.
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Old 08-25-2011, 09:11 PM
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The B&W was the correct choice. As stated, except for the one dilapidated building, the town looks "too new". As a personal choice, it seems too incongruent.

A perspective change maybe? Shoot down the mainstreet in the left of the frame and try to compose so the valley in the BG lines up?


I covered up the builings and I REALLY like the rest of the capture! Overall I like it, good job.
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I think the composition and exposure are stunning. I wouldn't change a thing.
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