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I was walking throught Copenhagens streets, and it began to rain.. But that doesn't stop people
I can take Critiques.. I came here to learn Make:Canon Model:Canon EOS 1100D Shutter Speed:1/166 second Aperture:F/5.6 Focal Length:55 mm ISO Speed:400 Date Taken:Jul 11, 2011 I used Adobe Photoshop Elements 8.0 to edit the brightness and make it darker at some point.. Last edited by pokemin1; 07-29-2011 at 05:42 PM. |
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It's hard to give a critique when you don't provide any exif data or say what you were trying to show in your shot. Please provide the data according to the forum rules.
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Okay. It also helps if you tell us what you wanted to show in your shot. It looks like a nice capture of a street scene, but was that what you wanted? I think the bright sky has caused the buildings and street to be underexposed. The image doesn't look quite level to me. I would consider cloning out the bikes on the left, as they distract me from the people (again, I'm not sure if that was your goal).
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Aside from the sky being a little over exposed, I think it's a fabulous street scene. I don't think it would work as a color photo. The dark areas provide a nice contrast between the darks and lights, I think the b&w conversion works very well with this shot.
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I really like it too! Would I be right thinking that the PPing you did was to darken out the left & right sides of the shot? If so, I think it could have been a little more subtly graduated maybe. There's a solid grey stripe in the top right that draws my eye too.
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