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Old 07-20-2011, 05:26 AM
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This is the inner look of the basilica of St Peter in the Vatican city, alot of art work in there
Can you please critic composition & light?

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I think if I were shooting this, I would either want the circular area right in the middle (horizontally) to emphasize the symmetry or over to the left third. Right now, your kind of in-between the two. That artwork looks great.
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I think if I were shooting this, I would either want the circular area right in the middle (horizontally) to emphasize the symmetry or over to the left third. Right now, your kind of in-between the two. That artwork looks great.
Thanks Krusty79, I did several shoots in deed, but I did nit like them, but this one
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For me, the circle not being in the center distracts me. Aside from that, lighting and exposure look good.
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Thanks for your comments
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I also agree with above comments about the off center placement of circle. I cropped it for you and it's a bit better now, hope you don't mind.
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I also agree with above comments about the off center placement of circle. I cropped it for you and it's a bit better now, hope you don't mind.
Looks good Milosh, thanks for helping on this
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After I posted it I noticed it's not exactly in the center, but a tiny bit off center to the right. But you can do better!
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After I posted it I noticed it's not exactly in the center, but a tiny bit off center to the right. But you can do better!
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