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I am BRAND NEW to the dslr scene. I just bought an EOS Rebel T2i. I took this picture from the penthouse of my 34 story condo building, which is about 7km away from the city centre of which i took the picture of. The picture is alright but im very eager to get better and better because I can really get some money shots with the views I have. Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!
![]() IMG_30161 by Sheva111, on Flickr Canon EOS REBEL T2i f/5.6 Exposure 5sec. ISO-100 FL 109mm No Flash No Tripod (But I did use a ledge, please let me know how much of a difference a tripod would have really made I am very curous)
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Hi,
First off you've got the makings of a very good shot, and if that's the view you have to work with then I'm sure you'll be producing some stunning images in no time! The first thing that struck me is that the top of the tower is touching the top of the frame. You might want to give it just a bit more room in future, particularly as there isn't too much detail in the water. The lights have been captured nicely, try experimenting with different shutter speeds, say upwards of 10secs and see what effect it has on the overall brightness of the image. If you were resting on a ledge, and you weren't touching the camera then in theory it should make very little difference as it is effectively doing the same job. Looking forward to seeing future efforts. Paul
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With the blurriness; that could be caused by wind on the ledge ever so slightly affecting the camera, not much you can do about that without securing it. You can set the camera to use a count down timer so it won't detect the shutter press, which will reduce any impact of taking the shot.
If you want to set up a sturdier rig on the ledge, or any other surface for that matter, consider looking at a gorillapod. I've got one and they will cling to virtually anything. I had one set up on the top of the empire state building and it coped with windy conditions very well. Here's a link for you to have a look: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bigrobo...n/photostream/ Paul
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I particularly like the reflections in the second one.. It breaks up the dark mass of water.
I have to admit that Scotts shot has the edge for me.. The detail in the buildings is fantastic, and they provide foreground interest.. In your shot, the tower looks kinda lonely.. I think I might have, if the opportunity was there, moved to a spot where the tower was just to the right of the office blocks so you could keep the forground whilst making the tower a feature. I also wonder whether a much tighter portrait shot of the tower and an office block or two in the foreground wouldn't have captured it even better.. Especially if you could include some water to add reflections. However these viewpoints are not always exactly where you want them.. you shot's a good un. Oh.. And a tripod would do exactly the same job as a ledge, except you're far more flexible as to where you can point your lens, and at what angle.
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