|
|||
|
The first thing that stands out is that the image is blurry. I would suggest that if you want to take long exposure shots, or shots that require slow exposure times then you need to invest in a tripod [and a shutter release cable]. Or you should find a way to steady your camera while taking the shot.
The other thing is that I do not feel that scene has been composed very well. Also, to get more useful feed back from the community, you should follow the forum rules. Be as specific as you can be with what you want critqued and at least provide the following camera setting info: aperture, shutter and iso settings.
__________________
http://www.flickr.com/photos/31354257@N02/ |
|
||||
|
Welcome!
In order to get the full benefits of the critique section we have offered a set of guidelines to read. They offer all kinds of wonderful info, including information we all need about your photos that should be included. Knowing info such as: your camera settings, more about your photo, your likes and dislikes and what you want help with, will only help us to help you better! Thank you in advance for your post and editing it! If you should need help with that, just holler~
__________________
Olympus user, Fuji E900, a canon & last but not least a Minolta 35mm and some really old large format box cameras.Not to mention a whole bunch of other stuff. Paint Shop Pro X3, CS3,CS5, Portrait Professional, Topaz Adjust, Lucis Art and the list goes on........ www.alockintime.com |
|
|||
|
Sorry for the NOOBness...
As far as critique; I'm not sure what to ask which is why it's so vague. I really do not know what makes a good photo vs bad photo. Here's the EXIF info: Manual Exposure Tripod was used F/ 6.4 Shutter 6.0 seconds Focal length 95.0 mm ISO 200 WB Auto Re: mwanafunzi, thanks for the feedback. A cable and tripod were both used. Some of details are in focus but I noticed a lot of the lighted areas were out of focus. Is there any way to correct this? As far as composition, anything other way you would like the photo to be setup? Thanks again guys! |
|
||||
|
I personally like the fact that the entire photo is NOT in focus. It gives it more depth. I also like that there are so many things to look at within the photo. For me, its keeps it interesting as your looking deeper into the photo trying to find even more cool things to look at
If you wanted it sharper for some reason you can use the unsharp mask tool or the smart sharp tool to add some to it
__________________
Olympus user, Fuji E900, a canon & last but not least a Minolta 35mm and some really old large format box cameras.Not to mention a whole bunch of other stuff. Paint Shop Pro X3, CS3,CS5, Portrait Professional, Topaz Adjust, Lucis Art and the list goes on........ www.alockintime.com |
|
|||
|
Thanks windrider!.
I tried to use the sharpen tool; however, with some of the aberration (sp?) , it came out a bit too fake looking- if that makes sense. I also tried to use the aberration tool but with no success. Thanks though for the thought- really appreciated! |
|
|||
|
Hey jc,
I too struggle with getting my night shots in focus. A way that I am trying to deal with this is to zoom into part of the image, in camera, immediately after taking the shot. That is parts that I think are important. As an example, zoom into the outline of the bridges. When I first looked at the pic, I felt the same as windrider. But after giving the image more time, I felt that the out of focus look only works in parts of the image.
__________________
http://www.flickr.com/photos/31354257@N02/ |
|
|||
|
Great info..thanks. I'll def. do that for future shots. Any tips on how to keep the image in focus? I know I can weigh down the tripod for stability. Any other ideas? I've heard to turn the OS off when doing shots like these.
|
|
|||
|
I usually [in camera] try and zoom into the image, the parts of the image that I think should be infocus, immediately after I have taken the shot.
__________________
http://www.flickr.com/photos/31354257@N02/ |
|
||||
|
Did you use a noise removal tool of some kind? It looks like a lot of detail might be lost because of that.
__________________
Photoblog Subscribe here! Flickr 500px In landscape photography, when you shoot is more important than where you shoot. |
![]() |
| Bookmarks |
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.
This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.
Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:
For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!
To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.
Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter: