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Again... another feedback post... i have no specific questions in mind, but prefer a honest cc whether it's good or bad... thanx guys



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Aperture f/5.6
Focal Length 24 mm
ISO Speed 200
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Old 06-06-2011, 06:48 AM
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I find it interesting that you captured mainly red and yellow light trails as the building behind them also has red and yellow light on it. But, a general critique would be that you don't have a real subject in this photo, something for our eyes to settle on.
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Old 06-06-2011, 04:54 PM
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I agree that you have some interesting things going on in this shot, but it doesn't really have a focal point. You might try planning how you want your streaks to appear in the shot.
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Thanx milodh and crusty.. Appreciate u taking the time to ctit as always
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