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[Art]

Hi all, these windows were taken in Venice, Italy, there was a lot of distractors that I already cloned

Can you please critic compositon and cloning?

Thanks Art

Exif Version=0221
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Model=Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XS
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Scene Capture Type=Standard
Exposure Mode=Auto Exposure
Shutter Speed Value=1/125 Second
Aperture Value=5.00
Flash=Off
ISO Speed Rating=ISO200

[JFSanders]

The cloning turned out fine at the forum limit size. Not sure what it would look like at 100% though. As to the composition, well you need to either make it three whole windows or two and the windows along the bottom are just a distraction. imho

Personally, I would have framed the shot to include all of the third window and cut out the bottom windows altogether.

Something like this. But with the third window in it.

Jim

[Art]

Thanks for your comments, this option looks ok
Art

[3bayjunkie]

i think it would look better cropped as well, but with 2.5 windows along the top and minus the bottum windows. nice building to photograph!

[Art]

Thanks for your comments, good option too
Art

[lynnartie]

Great photo what would happen if you crop out the two end windows and just use the middle window and include the smoke stack above the window? I thought that would look cool. L

[Art]

Originally Posted by lynnartie

Great photo what would happen if you crop out the two end windows and just use the middle window and include the smoke stack above the window? I thought that would look cool. L

Yes, I'll do that and post later again
Thanks Art