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Old 05-30-2011, 07:41 PM
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I love the shot. I've always wanted to do a silhouette shot.

My only suggestion would be to make the people more prominent. Even that's just grasping for some kind of Critique.
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Old 05-30-2011, 09:56 PM
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Definitley not a great photographer but I am a work in progress! It's hard to go wrong when you have a decent camera, a gorgeous sunset and photshop.
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Old 05-30-2011, 09:57 PM
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Thanks, I will see if I can bring the people out a bit.
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Old 05-31-2011, 07:53 AM
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It seems kind of dark to me
If it seems dark to you, why don't you lighten it, it's your photo, you can do with it as you wish? It looks like the histogram is mainly on the left, so there's plenty of scope for increasing the brightness without blowing too much..

The people seem to have a bit of CA, or you've over sharpened them, both can be adjusted in PP.. Have a close look and try to get rid of the slight halo's around the shapes. Also while you're looking at 100% you might notice some noise that could be removed easily.
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Old 05-31-2011, 10:47 PM
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Thanks, for taking a critical look at my photo, it is much appreciated! I will play with it a bit and see what I can do to follow your recommendations.

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