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Old 03-31-2011, 01:48 AM
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This is my first post. I know I have so much to learn yet. I am just learning about ISO and Aperture and how to change my shutter speed. Could you tell me how I could have made this picture better? If I chose the right settings? Thanks so much.

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Shutter Speed 1/800
Aperture 8.0
ISO Speed 400
Flash Off

Only Editing done was on my Adobe Photoshop CS4 to enhance colors.

I hope I did this right.
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Old 03-31-2011, 02:32 AM
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I like this scene, and I think the interplay of the different angles of the trees could make for an interesting subject. I think there are two things hurting you here:

1. Nothing is really in focus. You're aperture is stopped down properly, so it's not a problem of the depth-of-field. I guess the auto-focus (I assume you're not using manual focus?) just didn't catch it on this one.

2. Mixed shade/sun is tough on a sunny afternoon, because it's really hard to avoid blown out bits (over-exposed to the point of losing all detail/contrast), and still get the rest of the scene properly exposed. Here, my eye is constantly drawn to the blown out signs on the trees.

Anyway, standard disclaimer: I'm a newbie, but I do hope this helps....
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1. Nothing is really in focus. You're aperture is stopped down properly, so it's not a problem of the depth-of-field. I guess the auto-focus (I assume you're not using manual focus?) just didn't catch it on this one.
Thank you jentenna. Yes it was on manual focus. Sorry I guess maybe I should have added that. This is my first camera with the manual focus option so I am still learning. I did also use on my Photoshop while editing the Gaussian Blur Filter to brighten the colors. Not sure if maybe that was too much as well.

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Old 03-31-2011, 04:32 PM
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It's a nice scene with some potential. Besides the other comments I would add:

- If you have the chance to revisit, go back during golden hours, early morning after sunrise or late afternoon an hour before sunset

- Choose the main subject more carefully, could be anything: leaves, a bird, a small boat made from paper

- Try a low angle shot and use some of the trees to frame the shot of the creek

- Start off with the composition basics: rule of thirds, leading lines, ...

Hope this helps.

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