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I like this scene, and I think the interplay of the different angles of the trees could make for an interesting subject. I think there are two things hurting you here:
1. Nothing is really in focus. You're aperture is stopped down properly, so it's not a problem of the depth-of-field. I guess the auto-focus (I assume you're not using manual focus?) just didn't catch it on this one. 2. Mixed shade/sun is tough on a sunny afternoon, because it's really hard to avoid blown out bits (over-exposed to the point of losing all detail/contrast), and still get the rest of the scene properly exposed. Here, my eye is constantly drawn to the blown out signs on the trees. Anyway, standard disclaimer: I'm a newbie, but I do hope this helps....
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It's a nice scene with some potential. Besides the other comments I would add:
- If you have the chance to revisit, go back during golden hours, early morning after sunrise or late afternoon an hour before sunset - Choose the main subject more carefully, could be anything: leaves, a bird, a small boat made from paper - Try a low angle shot and use some of the trees to frame the shot of the creek - Start off with the composition basics: rule of thirds, leading lines, ... Hope this helps. /p |
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