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Complete cliché, but still

Image is taken in Thailand, and no other purpose than the beauty of it.
In PP removed the mosaic on the port and any other detail from the dark area. And cloned out a light pole with powerlines from the sky aswell.



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Old 02-23-2011, 11:12 AM
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If the PP have been done OK, I am an awful critique of my own work.

Is it highly visible that I recreated so much of the sky?

And generally, what would you do differently?
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I find all of those tree branches distracting. Too bad you couldn't find a spot where they didn't encroach on the composition, as that looks like a cool temple/structure. The sky does look a little odd as it goes from blue to yellow and I can't really see the transition area.
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Krusty is right.. Your colours have been boosted too much. And the leaves are intrusive, but I like the over all photo.

The cloning you did was well done.
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I find all of those tree branches distracting. Too bad you couldn't find a spot where they didn't encroach on the composition, as that looks like a cool temple/structure.
This... not much you can do about it tho, aside from cutting down trees i guess...
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