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Old 12-21-2010, 12:55 PM
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Good Morning DPS peeps! Please critique the use of contrast on this image, white balance,
and overall composition. If you were to tweak this, what would you do?

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Camera Canon EOS Digital Rebel XSi
Exposure 0.003 sec (1/320)
Aperture f/7.1
Focal Length 60 mm
ISO Speed 200
Exposure Bias +2/3 EV

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Old 12-21-2010, 01:37 PM
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Hi Dawn!

Ahh...winter in Wisconsin. I'm over here just across the river in Minnesota but I get to Oshkosh occasionally...usually for some little airshow they hold over there. You've probably never heard of it though.

I think your white balance and contrast are wonderful. The black water is a great contrast to the white snow. The composition isn't overly compelling but it's not bad either. The winding river does draw you in.

Hope that helps!
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Old 12-21-2010, 02:39 PM
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Small world - I grew up in Oshkosh. Dawn, I took a look at your blog, and saw Manitowoc right at the top -- my Mom's from there!

Anyway, I think the photo is just about right. I've been meaning to try some post-processing HDR on a photo like this -- you really can't get away with shooting separate photos because of the moving water, but I'd like to see if there's any more dynamic range that could be pulled out. Maybe even trying to boost the shadows a bit to see more detail in the tree trunks, etc.
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