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Old 12-05-2010, 11:12 PM
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Default First try at a landscape at night

I know the focus could have been better, the ground was soft and the tripod moved when I stepped away. My question is should I have used more or less sky? I wanted to show the amazing view I was seeing but couldn't decide on the composition.

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fstop - f/4.2
exposure time - 30.9sec
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Old 12-06-2010, 05:44 AM
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If your subject was the sky then more sky. There isn't really a strong subject as framed. Perhaps moving the house on the right to the very bottom of the frame might have improved things a bit. You also might try lowering the camera to near-ground-level and shooting up to get more of the sky while still keeping the house in the scene.
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Old 12-06-2010, 08:24 AM
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I think you should have moved your subject closer to the center. Sky or no sky, it doesn't matter without a well placed subject.

Spooky house though; it would make a great subject.
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