Modern Architecture

[dandellion]

I was going for unusual angle and geometrical structure. Still it doesn't work as much as I'd like to.

Any tips to make it better?


Model : Canon EOS 350D DIGITAL
White Balance : Auto
Shutter speed : 1/125 s
ISO Speed Ratings : 100
Focal Length : 18.0 mm
Flash : No, compulsory
FNumber : F4.5
Exposure Program : Aperture priority
Exposure Mode : Auto
Exposure Bias : +1/2 EV

[katia]

the colors and sharpness are definitely spot on! the straight crispness of the line in the upper right is fantastic!

the only thing that makes me not LOVE this shot is the fact that i'm not sure which building i'm supposed to be looking at. the pointy one, or the round one in the background?

[dandellion]

thank you.
Which building is the center is a hard question to me too. I wanted to play with geometry and make the image kind of "flat" so they both came into focus.

[curelightwounds]

I love how the red building looks like an arrow. It would have been fantastic if that arrow was pointing at something. Even a lone cloud in a blue sky would have been interesting in that context.

I could do without the white building filling the frame as much as the red as it looks just like another building.

[arakattack]

I think your picture is fantastic, I like the way you filled the frame and it has perfect light condition.