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Old 08-21-2010, 09:06 AM
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Hi,
I think that although it looks like you can't see the top of the bridge because of the mist/cloud, you shouldn't have cut the top off at the point it disappeared. For me there's too much foreground and not enough of what is a magnificent structure.
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Old 08-23-2010, 07:46 AM
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Hi KDominguez87,

This is a great start and has wonderful potential.

I agree with Dave I think you have too much foreground and not enough space at the top. Having said that, the good news is that I think it is recoverable. You can add some space at the top of the frame in Photoshop and then fill that space in with the fog.

It's kind of an intermediate level fix, but this would be a great image to learn on.

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Old 08-23-2010, 01:09 PM
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