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Old 08-20-2010, 11:40 AM
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What do I need to improve in this image?
a.Exposure
b.Colour
c.Composition
d.Clarity

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Day: 700pm
ISO:200
Aperture: f8
Shutter: 80
Flash: Did not fire
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Lens: 28-80mm f/3.5-f/4.5
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Old 08-20-2010, 01:46 PM
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a.Exposure: For this photo, the foreground could have been better exposed
b.Colour: I really like the colors in the sky. I dont like the purple in the laps on the left.
c.Composition: the foreground distracts the background (hope that makes sense).
d.Clarity: the pic is slightly blurry.
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Old 08-20-2010, 04:21 PM
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Thanks for the feedback, so need a tad adjustment to the foreground exposure? I will see how it looks like, thanks again and I will try to manipulate the adjustment colours.
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Old 08-20-2010, 04:24 PM
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ow by the way, for the clarity my title in that picture where I submitted to an entry is start to dream, so I guess It will give points to my title do you think for being a little bit blurry?
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Old 08-21-2010, 12:45 AM
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Personally, I think it would have worked better with a clear forground and a hazey/blurry background.

If you dont mind I will pawn this off to experienced DPSers. They would probably provide a better critique.. regarding the dreaminess of the photo
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