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Would like you to tell me what you would have done different, any suggestions, things I did wrong. What ever you can. Looking to improve and the best way is to get opinions from others.

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Here is a link to the guidelines that include information on on your missing information. Thanks ahead of time for editing your post.
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Here is a link to the guidelines that include information on on your missing information. Thanks ahead of time for editing your post.
Thank you for sending me to the guidlelines. This is the first time I have posted a Critique. I hope I now have what is needed. Let me know if I am missing something.
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no worries at all. I'm online a lot so please feel free to holler if you need any help!
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My two cents would be that you have all of the interesting aspects of your image scrunched down into the bottom right corner. There is way too much plain sky. Instead of the land taking up 1/3 of the image, I would have make it 2/3 because the sky is not interesting enough to merit 2/3 of the shot. The "plain" grass on the left 1/3 doesn't really add much to the image. So, to summarize, if you could retake the shot, I would recommend moving the camera down and to the right to center the most interesting elements of the shot. Also, you have to be careful using a polarizer on wide angle shots, as it produces that gradient effect in the sky.
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