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Old 07-28-2010, 10:06 PM
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These motorcycles look like a couple in love. What do you think about photo?
may be it would be better if the motorcycles were not in focus?

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Nice, and interesting. Overall I think you did quite well. But the bikes are a bit too far off center.
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Nice, and interesting. Overall I think you did quite well. But the bikes are a bit too far off center.
you are right
may be the bikes are too close to the frame
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I like the composition and also agree with sk66. Move the in towards the center just a little bit.

As for the camera settings, I don't know what to say as I can't understand Экспозиция. It's all Greek to me!
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navcom thanks for your interest.

sorry for techdata... it was in russian... fixed it
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Great picture. Just wondering if the motorcycles were on the left side instead of the right. That way your eye is naturally lead into the photo. I guess it depends on what your focus is.
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Great picture. Just wondering if the motorcycles were on the left side instead of the right. That way your eye is naturally lead into the photo. I guess it depends on what your focus is.
this way better ?

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this way is much better and comfortable to observe,if that makes any sense.great photo by the way...
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this way better ?

LOL, just backwards!
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I don't like the mirror image. I do like the image overall. I really like the "empty" space to the left of the bikes. Might not follow RO3 all that well, but it "feels" good to me. Cute title and idea for a pic.
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