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Old 02-13-2008, 10:52 PM
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anything to improve this image?



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ISO 100, 1/500, f 4,6 , Camera Panasonic FZ20.

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Old 02-13-2008, 10:57 PM
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No not really I love it I think it's great in every aspect I wish I could buy it. I was born in spain but only lived there a few years of my life.... sadly. Where did you take this?

Please take a look at the Critque Rules for posting here.

Why did you take this picture? I really want to know what was going on with the people but I think you did a great job.

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Old 02-13-2008, 11:01 PM
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Hi Celeb:
I will suggest you to read the rules so you will give us more information about your photo and your worries and that would let us give you a better feedback.
I will gladly share my thoughts after you edit your post (Sure a Moderator will ask you to do it).
You got some vibrant colors over there!
Hope you share with us more info!
Good luck!
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Old 02-14-2008, 08:34 AM
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There is only one thing I will be looking to do, and that is bring out some of the people in the shadows.
I think having those show will add to the picture.
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Old 02-14-2008, 12:34 PM
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I didnt notice that there were people in the shot until s_erez mentioned it, since your title is "Water, Sun, Life", Im assuming that the "life" part of the picture is the people, therefore that part of the picture should be easily seen, what you could have done is either backlight the people with a flash behind them, or go lower and use the sky as a backlight and have the sun peeking out from in between the people...
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Old 02-14-2008, 09:34 PM
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sorry I've edited the post with Exif information. About the picture: I don't want the People to be a subject of the photo. That's why they are in dark. I think I put a wrong title .
Anyway someone told me to send this picture for promotion to MacDonalds .
Thank you for your comments. Sorry for my English and my mistakes uploading the photo in this section. I've read rules, next time I promise I'll do better...

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Old 02-15-2008, 12:53 PM
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No prob, good luck with your pic
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