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Old 06-28-2010, 02:47 AM
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Nikon D5000, 18mm, 5", f/22, ISO-200.

Interested to know what you guys think about this. Are there too many conflicting shadows for it to work? C&C as usual. Thank you all!
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nice tones you've got there.
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Old 06-28-2010, 07:39 AM
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nicely shot, the tones and colours are great!
the distortion from the lens (perspective change) makes it look a bit weird though... try something like PTLens to make the verticals more parallel. And I'm not sure about the top center shadow... try cropping it out and see how it looks, even if you add a vignette later to darken the edges a bit.
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