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Old 06-27-2010, 04:06 AM
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This was shot in Tacoma, WA at the glass factory in April. I am trying to work on my post production a little and need some constructive criticisim from all. This is not an HDR shot although I did use Lucis art a little.

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Old 06-27-2010, 03:49 PM
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Please post your exif data and any other information that will assist us in giving you feed back on your image. Please read the sticky at the top of this section.

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Old 06-27-2010, 05:57 PM
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Joe - My mistake. I am a newbie to this.

Camera: Nikon D5000. The pic was taken on a semi-dreary day in the Pugent Sound area (If you've ever been you will know that most days are). The question I have is does the picture lack anything? I know it would have been better without the two ladies in the bottom left, but there were two issues.
1. If I cropped them the shot looses the left side of the main point of interest.
2. There were an never endless stream of people walking by.
I wanted to basically know if anyone thought I could have done something more (or less) with the photo to get someone to feel something when looking at it.

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Kevin,

The info we are looking for is shutter speed, ISO, aperture, lens focal length and any other data that will assist us in giving you assistance with your image. If you use image editing software you should have access to this data. If you do not the software that came with your camera will contain this info for each shot you take. This data is called EXIF.

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