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Old 06-26-2010, 06:09 PM
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Default The tree labyrinths

The tree labyrinths: Originally taken in colored but it BW version appealed me more. Here I am posting this image for your critiques.
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Old 06-27-2010, 09:24 PM
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Welcome to DPS. I like the B&W of the photo, my problem is that there is no significant subject in the composition to draw me into the ohoto. My eyes wander looking for something to settle upon. Your execution is flawless, work on composition. Hope to see more posts from you.

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Old 06-28-2010, 06:44 AM
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Thank you very much Ron, for you comments.
Actually I tried to make an abstract, keep viewer more busy to feel the roaming in labyrinths on tree branches.
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