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Old 06-14-2010, 12:35 PM
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Hi,
Iam presenting this snap of a park.Comment on the placing of the Fountain on the centre and the path to it as a digonal formation in the photo.

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Camera: Olympus FE310,X840,C530
Exposure: 0.003 sec (1/320)
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Focal Length: 6.2 mm
ISO Speed: 80
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Old 06-14-2010, 02:07 PM
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Hi,

The path works as a leading line, but I would recompose and move the fountain to left so that you can get more of the path in the frame. Also, the color seems off, a little too red/green, as if you shot with your white balance too warm. You could reduce the red and green channels in PS or GIMP to balance it better.
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Old 06-14-2010, 02:14 PM
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Looks ok but u shouldeved changed the angle...taking the shot exactly on the path in front of the fountain wouldeved been great.
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Old 06-15-2010, 06:36 AM
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Nice one....but i wud rather shot the scene a Morning or evening time....!!!!!!
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I agree with what tan2sie6 has pointed out. The shot have been better with the path infront of the fountain.
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