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Old 06-11-2010, 02:00 PM
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Hi,
Here Iam presenting a cropped shot of two tall trees.I know the photo doesnt cover the fore ground which may be needed for such landscape snaps. but i cant cover the foreground as i took this snap with zoom. Tell me about the composition and total result of the snap

twin tree closeup

EXIF:
Camera: Olympus FE310,X840,C530
Exposure: 0.002 sec (1/640)
Aperture: f/5.0
Focal Length: 31 mm
ISO Speed: 80
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Off, Did not fire
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Old 06-11-2010, 02:37 PM
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This image, to me, has no context...

I can't tell if you're in a forest or a park... It has no meaning and as such doesn't evoke any thought or emotion from me - so I don't like it. Perhaps spend a little more time thinking about why you're taking the photo and what you want people to think about when they view it - did the place make you feel relaxed? try to convey that with your photograph.

Sorry!

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Old 06-12-2010, 04:25 AM
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Sorry, I agree with Sime on this one; the trees need some sort of context in my opinion. The colours seem fairly bland to me too... just 2p-worth from a rank amateur though!
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