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Old 06-09-2010, 12:13 AM
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Default Storm clouds and sun at Arches National Park

Arches National Park ridge

The interest here is the contrast between the stormy sky and the sun on the red rocks. Does it need more contrast or is this enough? Any cropping needed?j Thanks.
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Old 06-09-2010, 02:22 AM
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I think your exposure is good!
Im no expert but, I would crop out most of the brush and the empty sky to just framing features and really focus on the light on the rocks.
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In my experience, low sunlight + dark storm-clouds = a fantastic opportunity for photography.

I'm only a rank amateur but to me it's a pity the biggest rock on the right is in the shade. Could you crop it out (a big crop, I appreciate) and concentrate on the sunlit rocks? It's also a shame you couldn't get about 20ft higher and look down on the rocks rather than looking up as you seem to be -- but unless you're an Olympic high-jumper in your spare time I guess that would probably have been impossible!

Having said all that, it's a wonderfully atmospheric picture; those clouds look so broody I'm wanting the find my umbrella even now as I'm sitting indoors! Thanks for sharing...
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Old 06-09-2010, 12:03 PM
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I agree that dark sky plus sunlight equals great photo op. but such situations are rare and don't last long. Grab them where you can!

As for cropping; I liked cutting out some of the sky to make it close to a panorama and then did a levels adjustment. Right now your histogram is all down in the lower range. Spread that out and and you will dramatically improve the sense of 'sunlight.'
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Perhaps it needs more contrast to make interesting enough.
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