Dirty Airplane Wing

[pdaley221]

I took this picture while on my way to New York for winter break. I was still in sunny florida when I took it. It came out a bit washed out so I tweaked the levels a bit.

heres the EXIF data: http://flickr.com/photo_exif.gne?id=2247801922

[oriolhdz]

Hi pdaley221:
What are your particular questions about this photo. In order to give you a precise critique from me and other members, it would help us to know what particular issues bother you.
Hope you can edit and update your info/questions.

In overall, I like the photo. It's very interesting and like the motion blur it's on the wing. Colors are strong.
Good luck!

[netbymatt]

That's a very interesting shot. I like the color and DOF you got on the wing. The ground looks a little too blue to me. This is probably a side effect of tweaking the levels. If you're up for another try, you might want to make the wing and ground separate layers and adjust the levels separately.

[Tafnap]

oriolhdz I don't think that is motion blur the wing is not moving. I think that is dirt/grime. I think that besides the color blue of the ground is what I don't like about this picture. Also maybe the full wing with some room to the right may have worked out better maybe even b&w or a variation of b&w.

[pdaley221]

Originally Posted by oriolhdz

Hi pdaley221:
What are your particular questions about this photo. In order to give you a precise critique from me and other members, it would help us to know what particular issues bother you.
Hope you can edit and update your info/questions.

In overall, I like the photo. It's very interesting and like the motion blur it's on the wing. Colors are strong.
Good luck!

Im not really looking for a precise critique im just looking for what you like and what you dont like about this picture. Thats what a critique is. Thanks for your critiques though

[pdaley221]

Originally Posted by netbymatt

That's a very interesting shot. I like the color and DOF you got on the wing. The ground looks a little too blue to me. This is probably a side effect of tweaking the levels. If you're up for another try, you might want to make the wing and ground separate layers and adjust the levels separately.

yeah Im gonna change the color of the ground thanks for the advice!

[jiminyClickit]

pdaley221,

Here are 7 areas to Critique. This section is made for a more complete discussion of a photo, and if you were really only wanting to know if we "like" your photo, "Share Your Shots" is a better place to post.

A Very Basic Guide to Critiquing Images

[pdaley221]

Originally Posted by jiminyClickit

pdaley221,

Here are 7 areas to Critique. This section is made for a more complete discussion of a photo, and if you were really only wanting to know if we "like" your photo, "Share Your Shots" is a better place to post.

A Very Basic Guide to Critiquing Images

I want to know what you like and what you dont like about it and how I can improve it. OK????