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Default Look how everybody is going home after work

Look at everybody going home after work.

Photo taken from my office, looking a the back of the cars.

Original date/time: 2009:12:23 18:31:23
Exposure time: 40/10
Shutter speed: 4.00
F-stop: 5.6
ISO speed: 200
Focal length: 6.2000
Flash: Not fired
Exposure mode: Manual
Camera make: FUJIFILM
Camera model: FinePix S9600

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Old 05-31-2010, 08:57 AM
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Nice long exposure shot.
You took it at the right time of day to still have color in the sky.

The only issue I have is the dead space on the right. I don't feel that the stuff in the right hand part of the frame really add to the image and the bright green triangle is a bit distracting.

Otherwise, nice job.
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I'm including a link for the guidelines to posting in the critique section. Please be sure to get familiar with them and include everything they ask for. Thanks so much for taking the time to look them over and edit your post!
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Hello, I checked the guidelines but still I don't know what do I have to edit in my post.
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