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I took this shot at the little church on Moffett field near Mountain View, CA. I like it, but it seems like something is not quite right, but I can't put my finger on it. Any suggestions?
Thanks, PC ![]() 1/200 F/8 (aperture priority) ISO 100 42mm Polarizer filter
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flickr Last edited by PrevailingConditions; 02-06-2008 at 04:03 AM. |
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The gutter's not straight. I say crop it out, leaving just enough dark under the last shingles to let us know that it ends there.
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I think the colors look great!
As mentioned, the gutter isn't straight. May be a good idea to crop. Other than that, the only thing that might make it look "not quite right" is that the roofline runs just about half-way up the image. Maybe you could try cropping either the top or the bottom to get it nearer a third.
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