#1 (permalink)  
Old 04-28-2010, 01:26 AM
Todd's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: IN
Posts: 236
Default Ocean bird swarm

4490643881_a4802de584_o.jpg

Please advise on improvment? Thanks
__________________
Dont sweat the small stuff
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 04-28-2010, 01:40 AM
Niresangwa's Avatar
Hack
 
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Milwaukee, Wisconsin
Posts: 2,011
Default

really cute image!

can't give much advice other than what I would do with it...

crop left side a little tighter to put that tight knot of birds a little tighter on the left border, take a little off of the top and bottom. I might also either warm it up VERY slightly, or try a very weak sepia tone and jump the contrast a little.
__________________
Website ... Blog ... Facebook
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 04-28-2010, 07:55 AM
I'm new here!
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Manchester, UK
Posts: 27
Default

Maybe crop a little from the top. Can't think of anything else it needs for me.

Generally I think it's great and I really like it; nice shot!
__________________
Traveller of the World
New to DSLR
Good Times
My Photos: http://www.flickr.com/photos/49642971@N06/
Reply With Quote
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 04-28-2010, 11:19 AM
Laurenbiz's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
 
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Wisconsin
Posts: 370
Default

This is a nice shot.

You might also want to try posting it in the 'Animal/Wildlife' photo critique forum here, since I think it would fit there, also! The more comments the better, right!? :-)
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0