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Old 04-27-2010, 05:25 AM
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This is my second try to submit this shot.

Camera = Sony A380

Date Taken 17 April, 2010

ISO = 100

Shutter speed = 1/125

Aperture = f13

Any comment would be appreciated

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Old 04-27-2010, 08:43 AM
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I like the composition, the one thing is, that's a little bit to warm for my taste.
Nice shot, though.

Robert
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Old 04-27-2010, 11:47 AM
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Well put together. A couple of tips:
a. you have cloud cover at a time when the sun is high. Wait for the sun to duck behind a cloud before shooting. This will allow even lighting.
b. Go lower for a different perspective.
c. Also consider shooting for symmetry underneath the center of the pier. You would have gotten both reflections as well as geometry.

Overall well done... as always, my suggested tonal variations are attached.
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Old 04-27-2010, 10:50 PM
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Thank you both for your comments. Very much appreciated

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