Pearl Harbor

[Sacasa]

Hey guys, so during my trip to Pearl Harbor I snapped this picture. Let me know what you guys think.



Sony Alpha
1/125
f 10
26mm
ISO 100
Minor crop

[navcom]

Hi! Wonderful location. I'm a big WWII buff so it's always interesting.

I would recommend asking a specific item you want critiqued though. The critique section is for posting images for critique (such as items that could be improved, composition advice, etc.), not just to share and get comments. That would be the "Share your Shots" section(s).

Thanks!

[Sacasa]

Ok, sorry about that... I'd like to know what you guys think about the composition and overall color/lighting??

[navcom]

It's an interesting photo and invokes feelings of the time in which it was used. There isn't much contrast in the image which is usually negates a black and white conversion but since the ATC facility was used during WWII, the black and white sets the mood. One thing I would remove is the vignetting in the upper corners. It's a bit distracting and takes away from the vintage feel.

Hope that helps!