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I have yet another dilemma: I have a series of shots with an early sunrise (early train travels are good for something); I tried to select the best of them, for me this is the one, but I wonder, could I improve something at composition? I guess the photo is sharp enough but any critique is welcomed:

From Sunrise


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ISO 100

Also, I would be grateful if you would have the time to look over the rest of them. Here is the link to the album:

Picasa Web Albums - Cosmin Ionut - Sunrise

And if you want to comment them individually, here are the pictures, with number references:

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Picasa Web Albums - Cosmin Ionut - Sunrise

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Picasa Web Albums - Cosmin Ionut - Sunrise

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Picasa Web Albums - Cosmin Ionut - Sunrise

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Picasa Web Albums - Cosmin Ionut - Sunrise

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Picasa Web Albums - Cosmin Ionut - Sunrise

Thank you, anticipated for all critiques
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Old 03-26-2010, 10:37 PM
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I think it's great as it is.
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Old 03-26-2010, 10:52 PM
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Nice,might be better if the horizon follows the rule of thirds,but quite fine as it is
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Old 03-26-2010, 10:55 PM
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Thank you for your appreciation

I think I can re-crop it to be compliant with the rule of thirds (if I'm not wrong, the original was bigger)
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very nice colors here, but I feel like it's lacking a point of interest. If you get a chance to reshoot in this situation, try to find something interesting to put in the foreground. As it is, it doesn't really hold my attention.
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Great shot, the mixture of colours make it look beautiful. Good capture
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