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Old 03-16-2010, 05:48 PM
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Default Puyallup Fair Shots

It was been forever since I have posted on here. I took these shots during the Puyallup fair and posted them ounce before, but did not get any good critique. I am mostly interested in knowing how my exposure and composition is on the two.

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Joshua


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Camera: Nikon D60
Exposure: 1.9
Aperture: f/8.0
Focal Length: 38 mm
Focal Length: 38.9 mm
ISO Speed: 100

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Old 03-16-2010, 05:51 PM
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amazing shots
i would just say on the second shot I would've liked to see more in the frame

i can't wait to move up to the Seattle area
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Old 03-16-2010, 06:37 PM
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on the first one, I would PP the ferris wheel out of it. It distracts from your subject. The subject also seems a bit monochromatic to me and the floodlights at the bottom of the shot also take away from the subject.
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