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Old 03-03-2010, 09:59 PM
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Park in Zagreb, Croation

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Old 03-04-2010, 12:08 AM
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It would be good to include the EXIF info, and specific questions ... ie are you looking for feedback on the composition, technique, exposure, focus, technical aspects.....

Overall it is an interesting and colourful composition of an unique autumn day with so many leaves. Would it be possible to capture the repetition of the benches in a landscape view? It is good composition - wise to be utilising the top rule of thirds for the placement of the largest bench the main focal point.
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Old 03-04-2010, 09:19 PM
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Thank you for your reply, SriMesh.

Well I have to admit that you are right. I didn't pay attention to EXIF info, and specific questions. I surely would in the future.

Why I posted this photography in "Landscape / Cityscape - Critique" section? Sure I wanted to know what would the others think about this photo in general and to write down their comments on. I am not a professional photographer but I think I know a "thing or two about thing or two", and the fact is that I react on the benches under yellow leaves, and the whole carpet of yellow leaves.

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Old 03-05-2010, 03:58 AM
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nice shot!
I think a deeper depth of field might have been better in this shot, the further benches seem a little unfocused.
I agree with SriMesh, maybe stepping a little closer and getting a diagonal line of benches would have been a better composition.
I did check your linked photostream and have to commend you on the many outstanding shots. I would recommend anyone viewing this to go check it out!
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