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This is a nice shot, then what's the question about it?
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This is a great shot already
The foreground gives depth and a sense of scale very well, there's a human element and multiple points of interest without being too cluttered. Very nice! The one thing I don't like is the cloud being right over Everest, it kind of merges the mountain into the sky and takes away a bit of the grandeur. I'd consider replacing it with a bluer sky, if you don't consider that to be 'cheating' |
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Don't really have a question as such, just looking for some constructive criticism, whatever that might be.
Junglebear: I take your point about the cloud. I think I would consider it cheating, depending on the finished result. I'll have a play with it and see how it comes out. |
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I see two separate worlds (3, counting the cloud, which I'd not remove unless the blue is really awesome), receding into distance from somewhat grubby & cluttered (& human) into mountain light & cleanness & ethereality. And beyond. The boulder in the foreground, echoed precisely by the peak in the background, points the direction. Onward and upward. Incredible composition. Did you do this knowingly?
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Three words: WOW Nice Capture. I personally would not change a thing. I took some shots of mountains in Alaska this past summer. This is a great shot. Check out my mountain shots on my website.
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Constructive criticism....
You are too far away from the "subject" at 10mm. The people and the tent are "lost". It's become a "pretty scenic" and doesn't tell a story. With an ultrawide you have to get CLOSE.
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Since others have covered this pretty well, I'll just mention that the people/tent are lost because of the rocks around them -- it's not their size, so much as where they are. They just blend in.
I do get a nice "sweeping panorama" feeling from the mountains, but it's not "grand and huge" as I imagine Everest is, in person.
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