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I find the clutter around the mushrooms abit distracting.
If I were you: - I will remove some of the "clutter". - Take this shot at eye level to the mushrooms, which will give you a different perspective. - A shallow DOF to allow us to focus on the mushrooms. My 2 cents.
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i agree with Greenhare.
and also... when i posted my first photo, people who know much about photography told me that i need to pay attention not only to the subject but also the background... so i'm forwarding this knowledge to you
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Hi Kmc and welcome to DPS. You have lauched in with a good shot here. Fungi is a great subject to prctice on. I find the twig going from top to bottom of the frame very distracting. I would have removed that. And these little guys look great from a very low viewpoint. May have to get a little messed up, and may get a few funny looks but worth it. Here's what I mean by way of an illustration. Subject position is poor on this but viewpoint is what I am trying to illustrate. PAUL
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Thanks for all of your wonderful feedback, I'm gonna try and get back out there and see if I can take all of it and get a better picture. This has been an amazing learning experience for me already and it's only the first picture. So once again Thank all of you I am extremely grateful for all of your opinions.
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