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01-28-2012, 12:56 AM
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f/14 52 seconds, ISO 125, 50mm. Shot for the Pizza cafe.
Needs work to make the sandwich clearer. Light applied with spotlight as needed. Over 120 Pictures: FrankSchmidt | RedBubble ----- ---- 
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01-28-2012, 03:05 PM
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Youve blown out the highlights on the sandwich and beer bottle label. There's too much light/shadow play in the sandwich to make really see what it is.
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01-28-2012, 03:37 PM
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I agree about the highlights being a bit too blown out, it took me a minute to realize that the sandwiches were sandwiches.
 Neat idea, though!
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02-01-2012, 03:51 PM
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Like the idea, but agree with the rest, hard to see the sandwiches.
However, the thing that bugs me the most are the shadows on the menu! I think it should be clearly visible.
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02-01-2012, 10:52 PM
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As others have said, blown highlights in the sandwich and then the odd shadows across the menu really detract from the image.
Paul
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02-01-2012, 11:02 PM
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Frank, not to be harsh but rather trying to be helpful.
You've been posting a lot of "how I took it" still lifes. Since it's not a critique section I've never commented. But IMO you really should be putting some of these up for critique/help as they could be better. You have the enthusiasm and keep working at it.. I think some help in the right direction and a few "retries" and you could make significant gains.
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02-03-2012, 01:01 PM
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02-15-2012, 04:10 AM
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I also whole-hardheartedly admire Franks enthusiasm. I feel like I have lost that lately and would like it back.
Even though Franks style differs greatly and it's not exactly my style, I still commend his efforts.
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