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Old 08-04-2010, 03:26 AM
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Looks good, the graffiti on the walls in the back really pops out!
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Since this is the "How I took it" section, perhaps you can explain how you lit the scene, what equipment you used, how you processed it?
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Yeah, check out the "how I took it" forum rules. That way we all get something out of it.

That way, when you post how you actually took it, I'll be able to figure out why this feels like a bad cut&paste job . I'm thinking it is a cut and paste job because of the uneven lighting and the extra pixels from the original background on the edges around your body, especially around the arms/shoulders, but correct me if I'm wrong.

Is there are reason you made the figure so exposed? The bright arms and shoes are distracting to me.

Did you take both photos? And is Fadi your name since that's pretty clearly text you added.
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Yeah, check out the "how I took it" forum rules. That way we all get something out of it.

That way, when you post how you actually took it, I'll be able to figure out why this feels like a bad cut&paste job . I'm thinking it is a cut and paste job because of the uneven lighting and the extra pixels from the original background on the edges around your body, especially around the arms/shoulders, but correct me if I'm wrong.

Is there are reason you made the figure so exposed? The bright arms and shoes are distracting to me.

Did you take both photos? And is Fadi your name since that's pretty clearly text you added.
Yep, I thought 'diz' looked familiar...

JPG: Photos: "back alley" by serkan korkmaz
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Old 08-04-2010, 02:04 PM
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it is make in Photoshop,

1st: slect ur photo n remove diz BG,
2nd: open BG image n Put ur image on diz file,
3rd: then pres Ctrl+J key then make ur image leyar dplicate,then slect duplicate leyar
4th: then go 2 Filters>Blur>Graussian Blur 4.5 then ok.
5th: then duplicate Leyar Style change in ko Overlay n leyar opacity 80%
6th: image n image duplicate laer merge togather.
7th: then added light efect so go to Filter>Render>light efect
then finaly adjest ur image brightness ........



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I can see all sorts of problems here - let's go easy though guys!
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Old 08-04-2010, 04:33 PM
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Yep, I thought 'diz' looked familiar...

JPG: Photos: "back alley" by serkan korkmaz
I quite like the original photo - its so full of colours and textures. BUT this shopped version is just a mess and I really don't like it; the subject looks unnaturally placed in the foreground and the added graffiti is both unnecessary and obviously shopped in.

Additionally, I hope you have the original photographer's permission for this as you haven't even mentioned who they are - did you take the original picture? if so then I would advise that you just keep it the way it was, if not then I would appreciate some recognition of the original artist.

Your 'how I took it' is also a bit disappointing; there was no real description of how you took it until someone asked you and even then it seems like this is nothing more than a photo shop nightmare as you don't mention actually taking the photo (or know anything about the photo itself).

I'm going to have to go and look at some encouraging artwork now as this barbarism of what was originally an OK photo has put me in a bad mood.
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Old 08-04-2010, 09:28 PM
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here it is reall Images.
n im not fadi

graffiti.jpg

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Strangely Intriguing
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