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Very cool shot. That interior glow was a nice touch.
When I saw there were 63 views, but only one comment, I was expecting a weak image, but I was pleasantly surprised to see this well done shot!
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I love the picture you have here, it really does look like an advert of some kind - maybe you should think up a slogan to go with it... something along the lines of lightning fast or white hot?
![]() I don't think I would do this to one of my photos though (not that I have any photos of lightning)... I can't really explain why. Do you not feel so proud of the lightning shot that the car kind of detracts from that? or are you more proud of your new car?
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It's not too bad for a first attempt. I don't mind the edited background so much as I mind the way the car is lit... it's unevenly lit and blotchy. The front needs light as much as the side.
The crop is a bit tight as well. Also, you might want to brush up on your lighting techniques as you mentioned the f-stop doing more with DOF.... yes and no, here with the artificial lighting it has more to do with how bright your light shows up on your subject. Here's a good example. 1/15th -handheld f/2.8 3 external flashes See that a lot of it is in focus, even for 2.8? I had to maximize my lighting and use a larger aperture. |
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Max ... thanks for looking but if I wanted critique ... I'd put this in the Critique section. |
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And if you wanted only praise, why not just post it in the SYS section? where in the rules of the "how I took it" section does it say critiques aren't welcome? In the rules of the subsection it does say: Quote:
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Very nice shot.
Only thing I would have probably done different was clone out your licence plate, at least get rid of the numbers. Kinda personal dont ya think?
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Brag? I thought I did exactly as the title suggested.
You want bragging ... have a look at what you wrote AND even adding one of your own photos to someone elses thread. I'm new here though so perhaps that's not considered rude here as in many other forums. I'll figure it out ... or not. |
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