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Old 07-02-2010, 01:23 PM
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Carlo, like many Italians you have inherited a wonderful sense of design from your illlustrious ancestors. Much of your site is beautifully crafted and well executed, though I can think of a few things I would suggest you do differently. First and foremost is the fact that very little of your work can be seen without a password. I am not going to spend a dime of my hard earned money going to a seminar unless I have seen the artist's work and believe they have something to teach me. Second, I would back off on the amount of flash you use. It takes a long time to download and most people are not willing to wait for it. A gallery of your best work needs to be made available right from the home page in HTML format to show us you know what you are talking about.Finally, I would not use the word "proposes" in the opening paragraph as it comes across as weakness. A better rendition of that paragraph would be:

"This class teaches the techniques, skills and insights of a master photographer with many years of acclaimed service."
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