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I know I need to do something about the right sides emptiness. I think not to bad for 1 days work and minimal html skills
Thomas Neubauer Photography Tell me what you think but don't be nasty. Really, constructive crit is welcome. I want this site to be nice and straight forward.
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Why is the header black and the body blue? It's not the greatest of colour combinations and would look a lot sleeker in a all black.
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Works well, organized well, and it's fast But god is it ugly.
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You need to sit down with a good publicist/copy writer. Sentences like "I have done photography in numerous fields" will not attract the audience you're trying to reach.
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"You need to sit down with a good publicist/copy writer. Sentences like "I have done photography in numerous fields" will not attract the audience you're trying to reach. "
I suppose I should reword somethings. My wife is an editor and has yet to even look at it. "Works well, organized well, and it's fast But god is it ugly.' Ugly is in the eye of the beholder, but not bad for one day. It will get more honed more, thanks for at least being honest. "I agree, but overall nice job!!!!! " Thanks it will get better "Capitals are important, even in the left hand menu." Tux I will take the rest of what you wrote into consideration. Off to go correct it. Also the host does offer hosting of php, I just have no clue on how to work with it and would rather spend the next 2 years shooting than learning code. "Why is the header black and the body blue? It's not the greatest of colour combinations and would look a lot sleeker in a all black. " I will consider it and give it a try. I suppose it looks like a big bruise right now. "Excellent. Who is hosting it? Loads quickly, no running around getting lost looking for things.. good job " It is being hosted on fatcow.com Thanks for the compliment. Thanks to everyone for their comments, they will help me further hone the website.
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another 2 cents....when you rewrite your content you might consider adding text links to the inside pages, so google and the like will have an easier time getting from page to page..might also want to rename you pages from the likes of about.html to something along the lines of wisconsin-wedding-photographer.html to get some extra heavy search terms in the url...NO SPACES use - or _
Also consider taking advantage of the alt tag for your navigation buttons...
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