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Old 04-10-2010, 05:19 PM
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Hey Everyone,

Infrequent poster here, looking for some constructive criticism on my website.

Note: I purchased this as a template so I can't really change the functionality per se, but I don't have some control over the organization and cosmetics.

So what do you think? All comments are welcome!

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Old 04-10-2010, 05:57 PM
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I liked it.

Its a bit dark, but that could be my laptop. I'm not one to talk about dark websites anyways...

Everything I would want to know as a potential customer I could find, I guess. The calendar, as people always point out, can be tricky when it looks empty...

not crazy about the flickr/commercial portfolio being on the splash page for a few reasons.

all in all nice site though.
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Old 04-10-2010, 09:15 PM
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In your pricing section, you have:

Quote:
To view photobook copy and paste this link into your browser address bar: THE URL TO THE PHOTOBOOK


From a usability perspective, instead of making your prospective client have to copy and paste the link (something that some users are lazy to do) you can embed the link directly.
Using the following HTML tag.

Code:

 <a href="http://asukabook.com/product_bbexd.html" 
target="new"  title="Photobook">
Click Here
</a> to view a sample  photobook.

Which would look like this:

Click Here to view a sample photobook.

If you need some help on this let me know.

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