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Old 08-11-2008, 07:14 PM
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I thought this was an interesting shot (but I am new and this is my first dslr) would appreciate some feedback on the general composition


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Old 08-12-2008, 07:38 AM
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I like the colours and perspective.

Excellent sky.

I wouldbe tempted to have a little more contrast and saturation and try to darken the right hand side slightly.

What had you intended the viewer to look at?

Also is that in Leeds?
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Old 08-12-2008, 12:21 PM
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Well spotted !

It was my last picture as I was going back to the car, nothing special but I liked the colours and the clouds..........

Took a picture looking up Bridgewater Place and the sign which I was quite please with, considering the weather last week.


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I like the DOF here and the varied colors. Very crisp.
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When i look again i am dawn to the shadow.

I dot think it would harm to crop to the curb, select the shadow and try match it to the rest...

just for an example.
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Truthfully, I'm drawn to the shadow and the sky moreso than the brewery. Knowing that the brewery is the subject, i'm curious to see more of it.

Love that sky though.
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