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Old 01-21-2010, 11:30 PM
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Default Sunsets but which compositon?

Below are two shots of the same scene I took the other day with matching exif data shot in manual.

I personnally really like both but I thought I would ask for some input mainly in regards to the composition but any other feedback welcome.

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Camera: Olympus SP570UZ
Exposure: 0.017 sec (1/60)
Aperture: f/3.5
Focal Length: 7.3 mm
ISO Speed: 64, 64
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Off, Did not fire

P1174044web

Camera: Olympus SP570UZ
Exposure: 0.017 sec (1/60)
Aperture: f/3.5
Focal Length: 7.3 mm
ISO Speed: 64, 64
Exposure Bias: 0 EV
Flash: Off, Did not fire
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Old 01-21-2010, 11:40 PM
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I believe this post would have been better in comparison critique..

For my part, i like the first composition better. The silhouettes are better positioned for my taste.
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Old 01-24-2010, 05:13 PM
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Hi!

I really like the first photo better. The buildings seem to be placed more natural and the gradient fom the horizon to the top edge of the frame is totally awesome!
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Old 01-24-2010, 11:31 PM
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I dont know, but I like the second one, because, for me, it looks cleaner
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Old 01-25-2010, 08:35 PM
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I think the first one is better of the two. There's a LOT of empty space in the upper half of the image that I don't particularly care for, however.
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