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Old 01-13-2010, 01:56 AM
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Question one or two? u decide

I would like to know which is better. I can't decide. I would also like any comments on lighting, composition, and any other tips you may be able to provide. Thanks in advance

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Old 01-13-2010, 03:16 AM
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It's a tough call. Because I have no strong preference as between the two, I would pick the first. You have finer eyelash detail that is lost in the processing of the second. In terms of composition, I would get rid of the dark object in the upper right corner. It adds nothing to the shot (unlike the bottle, which is great) and is a mild distraction. There's a little shadow in the lower cheek. I can't tell you what kind of lighting to use to remove it in this kind of shot, but ideally, I think you'd have a more even lighting for a baby shot of this nature.

It's a beautiful shot. I'd be happy to have taken it, very sweet. My critiques are simply a few ideas to consider in future shots.
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