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For what it is worth, I could use more eyes to see what I am probably not seeing. Here's one I just took yesterday, and processed today. I do not have a remote for my flash, but will very soon. I also thought I had gotten enough info in the darks to pull it out, but on review of the shoot, most of the images had issues with exposure and only in the last few shots had I moved the furniture to a much better arrangement. I should have bracketed every shot. Excuses excuses!

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Old 10-09-2009, 12:10 PM
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nice, only minor thing is the reflection on the stars of the us flag and maybe turn the brightness down on the tv screen or even shop it out. if going for reflection of flag on floor, should have got whole thing in in my opinion
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Thanks Nathan, I spent more time than I wanted in getting some of the distractions cleaned up. I'll knock down the TV too. The reflection on the floor is not the point, I could make it go away, but wondered whether any particular element was a substantial distraction. Shooting with available light, existing scene only, at the time of opportunity, presents these kinds of challenges.
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