Storyboard A or B?

[lputman]

I will send this 10x20 storyboard off to the printer but I'm not too certain which one, if either, or maybe a different combination.

A


B

[mcdeegan]

I am a newbie trying to parlay into the "don't just look but respond threads" so here goes. Don't know a thing about how you are using this storyboard and maybe I am guessing wrong here but here goes ... Other life publications editor response -- if I have to choose one I pick the second. The first one made me tilt right away and my eye got smaller as I moved along. If I can make a suggestion as to the second one, it is to make the far right photo visually appear the same size as the left to balance the full three thirds effect. Am I anywhere close to what you are doing?

[Haj533]

I prefer the second one. I think the black background really makes the photos pop. Especially with the orange. Also, the first one felt a bit heavy on the left side. That might just be me though! You have a beautiful subject by the way!

[lputman]

Thank you.

I do think the orange 'pops' on the black background too.

If I can make a suggestion as to the second one, it is to make the far right photo visually appear the same size as the left to balance the full three thirds effect.

I will attempt to adjust that.

[SusanH1970]

Definitely the second one, Lori. The orange pops against the black, and I also like the symmetry.

[Drax]

Both look great!!!

But for me, i take the fonts of the second one to the first one and that will be my "C" choice for the printer.

Hope that helped.

[mfreg]

sorry..I'm going to play "devils advocate" here...I like A...I like the lighter background, I don't know about white, but I think I would like a brighter background. I personally like the arrangment of the photos in the 1st one also, I don't know why, I just do.
adorable little girl by the way, I like the photos alot.

regards
mike

[HoosierGal]

I prefer the second. The black is a great contrast to the orange and I like the balance better.

[Kieran2009]

I am liking the first set but the fonts of the second one better. In any case your subject is absolutley adorable.

[lputman]

Thank you all. I will try some of these combos and let the grandmother make her selection.